Comments on: The Third Attempt to Take the Teddy [short story] http://www.passwordincorrect.com/2009/09/11/the-third-attempt-to-take-the-teddy-short-story/ Mobile Ebooks, Self-publishing, Digital Storytelling Mon, 14 May 2012 05:43:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2 By: J. M. Strother http://www.passwordincorrect.com/2009/09/11/the-third-attempt-to-take-the-teddy-short-story/#comment-917 J. M. Strother Wed, 16 Sep 2009 00:54:09 +0000 http://www.nizejpodpisany.com/?p=6253#comment-917 I must admit I got a little confused. Your explanation helps out quite a bit. The father actyally turned out to be rather perceptive after all despite being a schlemiel. “She’s hiding the bear under the bed, maybe there’s something wrong with her?” He asked his wife..." Welcome to #fridayflash. ~jon I must admit I got a little confused. Your explanation helps out quite a bit. The father actyally turned out to be rather perceptive after all despite being a schlemiel. “She’s hiding the bear under the bed, maybe there’s something wrong with her?” He asked his wife…"

Welcome to #fridayflash.
~jon

]]> By: J. M. Strother http://www.passwordincorrect.com/2009/09/11/the-third-attempt-to-take-the-teddy-short-story/#comment-5524 J. M. Strother Wed, 16 Sep 2009 00:54:00 +0000 http://www.nizejpodpisany.com/?p=6253#comment-5524 I must admit I got a little confused. Your explanation helps out quite a bit. The father actyally turned out to be rather perceptive after all despite being a schlemiel. “She’s hiding the bear under the bed, maybe there’s something wrong with her?” He asked his wife..." Welcome to #fridayflash. ~jon I must admit I got a little confused. Your explanation helps out quite a bit. The father actyally turned out to be rather perceptive after all despite being a schlemiel. “She’s hiding the bear under the bed, maybe there’s something wrong with her?” He asked his wife…"

Welcome to #fridayflash.
~jon

]]> By: nizejpodpisany http://www.passwordincorrect.com/2009/09/11/the-third-attempt-to-take-the-teddy-short-story/#comment-911 nizejpodpisany Mon, 14 Sep 2009 20:41:02 +0000 http://www.nizejpodpisany.com/?p=6253#comment-911 If you're running into problems you need sth you feel safe with – like a teddy. A pressure a girl had in school (everybody around had a blog) was a big problem. I can imagine that, my daughter was getting crazy when we were late with buying her a latest version of Tamagothi;-) You're right, the ending is not clear on that. If you're running into problems you need sth you feel safe with – like a teddy. A pressure a girl had in school (everybody around had a blog) was a big problem. I can imagine that, my daughter was getting crazy when we were late with buying her a latest version of Tamagothi;-) You're right, the ending is not clear on that.

]]> By: Piotr Kowalczyk http://www.passwordincorrect.com/2009/09/11/the-third-attempt-to-take-the-teddy-short-story/#comment-5523 Piotr Kowalczyk Mon, 14 Sep 2009 20:41:00 +0000 http://www.nizejpodpisany.com/?p=6253#comment-5523 If you're running into problems you need sth you feel safe with – like a teddy. A pressure a girl had in school (everybody around had a blog) was a big problem. I can imagine that, my daughter was getting crazy when we were late with buying her a latest version of Tamagothi;-) You're right, the ending is not clear on that. If you're running into problems you need sth you feel safe with – like a teddy. A pressure a girl had in school (everybody around had a blog) was a big problem. I can imagine that, my daughter was getting crazy when we were late with buying her a latest version of Tamagothi;-) You're right, the ending is not clear on that.

]]> By: nizejpodpisany http://www.passwordincorrect.com/2009/09/11/the-third-attempt-to-take-the-teddy-short-story/#comment-909 nizejpodpisany Mon, 14 Sep 2009 14:51:14 +0000 http://www.nizejpodpisany.com/?p=6253#comment-909 If you're running into problems you need sth you feel safe with – like a teddy. A pressure a girl had in school (everybody around had a blog) was a big problem. I can imagine that, my daughter was getting crazy when we were late with buying her a latest version of Tamagothi;-) You're right, the ending is not clear on that. If you're running into problems you need sth you feel safe with – like a teddy. A pressure a girl had in school (everybody around had a blog) was a big problem. I can imagine that, my daughter was getting crazy when we were late with buying her a latest version of Tamagothi;-)
You're right, the ending is not clear on that.

]]> By: Piotr Kowalczyk http://www.passwordincorrect.com/2009/09/11/the-third-attempt-to-take-the-teddy-short-story/#comment-5522 Piotr Kowalczyk Mon, 14 Sep 2009 14:51:00 +0000 http://www.nizejpodpisany.com/?p=6253#comment-5522 If you're running into problems you need sth you feel safe with – like a teddy. A pressure a girl had in school (everybody around had a blog) was a big problem. I can imagine that, my daughter was getting crazy when we were late with buying her a latest version of Tamagothi;-) You're right, the ending is not clear on that. If you're running into problems you need sth you feel safe with – like a teddy. A pressure a girl had in school (everybody around had a blog) was a big problem. I can imagine that, my daughter was getting crazy when we were late with buying her a latest version of Tamagothi;-)
You're right, the ending is not clear on that.

]]> By: CJ (hojpoj) http://www.passwordincorrect.com/2009/09/11/the-third-attempt-to-take-the-teddy-short-story/#comment-908 CJ (hojpoj) Mon, 14 Sep 2009 14:07:05 +0000 http://www.nizejpodpisany.com/?p=6253#comment-908 "because she had a fever and a lower body paralysis, which you couldn’t see" - LOVE this line! I like the story - the idea is wonderful and the characters endearing, but I don't really understand the end, why would she need the teddy bear to start a blog? I hope I didn't miss anything. "because she had a fever and a lower body paralysis, which you couldn’t see" – LOVE this line!
I like the story – the idea is wonderful and the characters endearing, but I don't really understand the end, why would she need the teddy bear to start a blog? I hope I didn't miss anything.

]]> By: CJ (hojpoj) http://www.passwordincorrect.com/2009/09/11/the-third-attempt-to-take-the-teddy-short-story/#comment-5521 CJ (hojpoj) Mon, 14 Sep 2009 14:07:00 +0000 http://www.nizejpodpisany.com/?p=6253#comment-5521 "because she had a fever and a lower body paralysis, which you couldn’t see" - LOVE this line! I like the story - the idea is wonderful and the characters endearing, but I don't really understand the end, why would she need the teddy bear to start a blog? I hope I didn't miss anything. "because she had a fever and a lower body paralysis, which you couldn’t see" – LOVE this line!
I like the story – the idea is wonderful and the characters endearing, but I don't really understand the end, why would she need the teddy bear to start a blog? I hope I didn't miss anything.

]]> By: nizejpodpisany http://www.passwordincorrect.com/2009/09/11/the-third-attempt-to-take-the-teddy-short-story/#comment-880 nizejpodpisany Sat, 12 Sep 2009 10:42:31 +0000 http://www.nizejpodpisany.com/?p=6253#comment-880 Thanks for the comment. I'll try to submit something more in my style (tech, tech, tech) next week:-) Thanks for the comment. I'll try to submit something more in my style (tech, tech, tech) next week:-)

]]> By: Piotr Kowalczyk http://www.passwordincorrect.com/2009/09/11/the-third-attempt-to-take-the-teddy-short-story/#comment-5520 Piotr Kowalczyk Sat, 12 Sep 2009 10:42:00 +0000 http://www.nizejpodpisany.com/?p=6253#comment-5520 Thanks for the comment. I'll try to submit something more in my style (tech, tech, tech) next week:-) Thanks for the comment. I'll try to submit something more in my style (tech, tech, tech) next week:-)

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